"Around this time last year I heard of the John Locke Essay prize, and was interested. It seemed that they asked the most interesting questions of various competitions, and to be frank, they seemed the most accredited and prestigious competition in the eyes of universities. Part of essay competitions is showing universities that you are truly fascinated by a course; the founder spoke at the gala dinner about the passion (bordering on "lunacy") necessary to write a 2000-word essay at the start of summer. But also, once you start writing, you become increasingly proud of your work and more hopeful about your chances for success: the "what ifs" start to come to mind.
I chose to consider the economics questions, one of which seemed very interesting. The question asked whether "behaviour engendered by a hope of profit" benefited society more or less than charitable or government activity. I started by considering the microeconomics of Non-Profit Organisations versus the objectives in Profit-Seeking firms. Using the US health sector as my case study, I analysed various theories - I wanted to give a balanced perspective, but one that explored more nuanced arguments rather than the simple back-andforth between right-wing economists and those on the left. This was the battle with this question, it lent itself to a simple age-old political debate, and I felt I could write a stronger, more academic essay by making the simple points quickly, and moving onto a more valuable discussion. I think the project helped me improve my academic tone and research skills plenty, with many redrafts and replans before the final send-off. Mr Fulford-Brown in particular, was a very helpful reference point, encouraging me to look far from the A-level syllabus and write about what interested me rather than trying to tick boxes, and I am very grateful for all the criticism and encouragement he gave.
I was subsequently thrilled when I received the email that I had been shortlisted. Just to be considered for such a competitive award made me feel proud of the work I had put in. On the night of the results dinner, I was far more invested than I had anticipated. I think that once you get there, there is a part of you that really wants to win it. No joy this time, but with the skills I have picked up, I am optimistic for my academic work in the future; getting practice in now will certainly make university a gentler learning curve."
James, Upper Sixth Form